Pros: okoy. so i really like the back legs. they are always the pain in the ass for me. and the paws are so cute amg ;c; and everything about this is amazing. but since its a critique lets get to the cons.
Cons: somehow it seems as if the front legs are longer than the back. there is something wrong with the way the back legs are bending wich makes them shorter. i think the ears are too long. and sorry for being a bitch buutt..... EYESONHAIRASDFHHH. ehh ok i'm done. i make horrible critiques ok? ok. hope you understand.
okay, this is my first critique in a while, so bear with me here. i'm going to mainly list some pros and cons, and maybe some ways you can improve.
-the colouring is nicely done, i don't see any colours sticking out of it at a glance.
-the lineart is smooth, especially since it's so thin.
-the design of the character is really simple, and there aren't many markings to distract someone from looking at anything with it.
-the anatomy on the legs is wonky, i can't tell what this is supposed to be. you should look up anatomy tutorials and make it look more like what it's supposed to be.
-the beginning of the tail by its back legs is too skinny, maybe make it thicker next time? i'm not sure if this is stylizing or what, but it looks wrong to me. and the tail kinda looks like it was clumped together with gel at the end of it, so maybe you make it look more even.
-is the brown stuff supposed to be shading? if so, you should add more of it and maybe make it darker because it looks light to me. (especially on shadow) it also looks incomplete, so maybe add some more at certain points?
-you can see the eye lineart through the hair. i know this is supposed to be stylizing, but i think if you can see at least PART of the eye, you can make out where the eye is supposed to be. so i recommend not really doing that.
-the nose is placed wrong on the muzzle. it looks like the muzzle is supposed to be at 3/4 angle, but the nose is on the side.
-you should add wrinkles on to the scarf. it's supposed to be fabric, so adding some wrinkles would make it look less flat.
-i know this is also supposed to be stylizing, but you should make the paws look more proper. i know there are tutorials on how to do that, so try looking at a few.
-the ears look like they were glued on to the hair, maybe you should draw the head before adding hair.
eeeeh, i'm not exactly the best at critiques, but if you need more elaboration on anything just tell me and i'll try helping you out!
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